this weeks critique gave me some really good direction for how to finish up my music app. Overall kyle was happy with it but he gave me some tweaks to make.

More full screen images

since my project is based on the 90s hip hop genre, a lot of the media used in this genre includes full width images. I notived this especially in the P Diddy magazine i used for referencing layouts. He suggested to help make it feel less text heavy, i should try and split up the ‘journey’ section by using more dividers with big images.

Inspiration

Before

After

Check colour contrast

change text to white

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these are the screens Kyle said i should check the cobtrast of and possibly change the text colour to white.

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I’m really glad i checked this as it failed on WebAIM. i then decided to check all of my other colours to make sure this wasn’t a reoccuring issue in my project.

First of all, I changed the text to white. I honestly wasn’t happy with the result as it felt like it was inconsistent and introducing too many colours.

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I ended up just changing the shade of blue to a lighter one, that passed all WebAIM checks. Im really happy with the result.

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